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You are
sugar
on my
coffee.
But
sugar
makes me
sick.
Sugar
makes me
weak.
So I
prefer
black coffee.
And now
I hate
sugar.

You are
the cream
on my
chocolate.
But cream
makes me
fat.
And
that is
a fact.
Cream
makes me
fat.
So I
hate
cream.

Sugar
you are.
Dream
and
cream.
Delicious
yet
atrocious.
So I
hate
sugar
and
cream.
:giggle:

i think it has symbolism in there, and some meter too. i'm not really sure. But still, i hope you like it!
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YS-Liliumsynth Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011   Writer
hmmm...very ambivalent huh.=D ^^ :icongoodjobplz: and :iconftwplz: for the concept and words!^^
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Piscea Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011
ano yung FTW? di ko alam ih.. ^^;
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YS-Liliumsynth Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011   Writer
FTW means For The Win!:XD: :la:
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SweetBunnyMelting Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very cute. I like it.
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Piscea Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
thank you! :meow:
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Obsidian-Nightfall Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Student Writer
This is fantastic, well done...
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Piscea Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
thank you! :meow:
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Obsidian-Nightfall Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Student Writer
My pleasure...
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